21 January, 2007

and then the ants ate the grey matter...

a memory is making pensive puddles
in a place i can't find
a silent forgotten corner
the back of my mind
i'm searching a dead end
for a reflection of me
a brick is loose
it is you i see

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  3. Anonymous10:10 am

    oxymoronish, but this band...zero 7 has a song called look up..

    look it up...

    ani

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  4. Power packed neat little write...WAy to go!!!!

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  6. i see you like quoting others. ideally sunsetter would have been flattered.

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  7. never could fathom how poets like you (and ani ... errrmm, i hope he won't be offended) manages to produce such amazing results ... :)
    it's like waltzing through a surreal world. or something. ;P

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  8. maiylah: thankyou :)

    ani: downloaded the song :)

    everyone else: :)

    am in a good mood today :)

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  9. haunting imagery.....lovely!

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  10. Anonymous1:19 am

    i luved it..th one who shuts herself every now nd thn wrote this is somethin unbelievable for me..
    :)

    modi..

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