09 October, 2006

Hear me

Hush...listen closely...
there...can you hear her soul shatter
a million luminous little pieces
her mind romps over the shards
she aches and writhes
walks over blood-washed floors
her angel gently shines over
she turns a shivering shoulder, a stifled sob
the day dawns... she readies herself
vainly, she defies the ghosts in vain
a hint of a smile glistens on her tears...

10 comments:

  1. Anonymous6:02 pm

    your best till now...seriously...

    ...ani

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  2. thankyou...seriously

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  3. Hell yeah,I can hear the crash of soul and the smile in the sobs....Nice write...

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  4. Anonymous5:53 pm

    Hell yeah,I can hear the crash of soul and the smile in the sobs....Nice write...

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  5. well with THAT kind of poetry being written mine seems slightly juvenile..neway will put some of mine up online soon-chandni
    quote-unquote......omg!!!

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  6. stop being sarcastic....sniff sniff

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  7. stop being sooooo modest....{giggles}
    ok....bas bahut ho gaya...

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  8. i dnt have a modest bone in my whole body sir....i selfishly lap up all ur praise =P

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  9. Anonymous3:49 pm

    fighting against all odds... :)

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  10. Anonymous12:19 am

    i hv weird fantasies..i hope u kno..these r th kinda times whn i feel like bein th devil..if it was me writin this..instead of th angel i would hv seen th devil..cause i don believe tht moments like these can even give u a hint of smile even if th angel shines on u..
    but i must say..its written in an amazing manner...nd not just sayin it!!

    modi..

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